A heads-up to those who have been faithfully reading this
story. I wrote all that I have so far of
The Travelers over a year ago. This chapter I am now posting is the last one
I’ve written. I do want/hope to write
more and eventually finish this story, but the characters have not spoken to me
for awhile. I’m hoping that posting this
might give me the push/inspiration/words to finish it. I’d love to know anyone’s thoughts on this
story, as well as any others I’ve written and posted. Feedback does help with the inspiration
sometimes. Thank you!
JL-
Arlytian Terms
*micro-needle
– An exceptionally small needle used in delicate surgeries
*Biosealant – A special type
of bonding agent that can be used both inside and outside the body. Often
used in surgeries.
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Chapter
25
There was an intense soberness in their
quarters as Oz and Cay settled together in the room’s small sitting area.
Amrynn lay sleeping on their bed, still oblivious to what Cay had
discovered. Neither man had said much since leaving the med unit, and the
silence continued as they sat side by side drinking hot cups of nectar.
Neither was aware of how much time passed
until the quiet was disturbed by a knock at their door. Oz rose
halfheartedly to see who was there. A concerned-looking Seren greeted him
when he opened the door. Respectfully, but in a subdued manner, Oz
welcomed him inside.
“Charge Seren, come in.”
“Thank you, Oz. I just came to check
on the three of you and see if I could be of any help.”
The men offered Seren a seat, and Oz
shrugged rather disconsolately while looking to Cayson to answer the Charge Pilot’s
offer.
“Have you seen the results of the brain
scan?” the young doctor questioned.
“No,” Seren acknowledged. “But I
talked with Backer Eris and he told me what was found.” He paused
briefly, seeming to examine his next words. “I know a blood clot is
serious, but Eris said you have a treatment plan already.”
“It’s tentative right now,” Cay corrected.
“We want to discuss the options with Amrynn first.”
Seren nodded in understanding. “What
exactly are the options?”
Cay looked across the room to his wife’s
sleeping form as he answered. “There are no medications to cure clots, so
that’s not even in the game plan, although once we’re settled on Neveah I’d
really like to focus a lot of research and testing on this area.” He
sighed. “But since that’s not an option right now, we’re looking at two
risky choices. One is to simply keep on as we did before we knew of the
clot. If she’s had it since her injury when she was twelve, then it’s
already been there on her brain stem for seven years. It’s small, which
is one good point, but it’s not dormant. She’ll continue to get headaches
and be at risk for innumerable other problems should the clot grow or
shift. We can try to treat what we can as they happen, but the root will
never be corrected.”
Seren took that information in.
“What other problems could potentially occur if you do nothing about the clot?”
The smallest of noises came from Oz, and
Seren’s look at the man showed him how stressed and afraid his co-Traveler
was. Cayson’s eyes had gotten damp at his question as well, but his voice
kept a professional quality to it.
“They’re all only ‘maybes’ right now, but
a clot located where it is could eventually cause brain damage, impaired motor
skills, depleted vision and hearing, vertigo…and it could end up being
fatal.” Cay took a shaky breath. “If the clot grows, it could
completely cut off oxygen to her brain. She’d be dead in hours if that
happened.”
At those words the obvious but muted sound
of tears could be heard. Oz had covered his face in both hands and was
straining to control himself. Seren ached for the man and had every
sympathy. But Cayson, who knew that tears were a rare thing for his
husband, put his arms around the slightly taller man and held him. For a
minute, Oz cried into his neck, but then seemed to be able to pull himself
together and bring the tears to a halt.
“Sorry,” he choked out.
Seren shook his head at him. “Don’t
apologize, Oz. There’s no shame in feeling emotional about this.”
Taking his attention off Oz so the man could have the sense of gathering
himself together without being the focus, Seren looked to Cayson. “What’s
the other choice, Cay? You said you had two options.”
Cay nodded and with one arm still around
Oz, told Seren of their other choice. “I could perform a surgery on her,”
he said hesitantly. “The incision itself would be small, but the surgery
is very delicate. I’d have to insert a micro-needle into the clot
to drain it, and then follow that up with a special biosealant to
prevent the clot from reforming. With the clot being so small and at her
brain stem, it will be very difficult to do, and if I’m off even a little I
could cause damage to her brain and innumerable other parts of her body.
If I slip, I could paralyze or kill her while trying to save her.”
“But if you’re successful…?” Seren asked
encouragingly.
Cay managed a barely hopeful smile.
“If I’m successful, then the clot will no longer pose a danger to her, and she
shouldn’t be any more prone to headaches than the rest of us.”
The three men were silent for a few
minutes at that thought. Seren took the time to run his mind through
memorized data and ways to help.
“Cayson…Oz,” he said quietly after several
minutes. “Offering my own medical services wouldn’t be much help, but we
have several highly qualified medical personnel who I would make sure were
available to you. You know Backers Eris and Eli would be top-quality
assistants. Eris especially is good with anesthesia practices.
Charge Ionna is another who is very qualified, and you may or may not be aware
that Charge Kel from Culinary actually has a first ranking in medical
service. According to his records, he’s been involved in several types of
surgeries. Nothing in the brain if I recall, but draining a blood clot
isn’t a new operation and I know he’s been involved in at least two drainings
in other body locations…one in the leg and the other on a lung.”
Cayson’s eyes met his. “I worked
with Kel in our med training. He’s exceptional, but I didn’t know he was
experienced in blood clots. I’d like to talk with him.”
Seren nodded. “I know he’d help any
way he could.”
Cayson’s gaze grew determined. “I’ll
try to meet with him tomorrow, but Oz and I can’t make any plans until we
discuss all this with Am.”
“I understand, but I want you to know that
I’ll do anything I can for all of you. I’ve no intention of losing even
one Traveler. We’re each other’s friends and family even more than
coworkers, and we’re going to do everything we can to provide a new and advantageous
life for everyone.”
The certainty with which he spoke
encouraged the two men, and small but much more real smiles appeared on their
faces.
“Thank you, Seren,” Cay said
gratefully. Oz didn’t speak, but he nodded in obvious appreciation as
well.
“You’re welcome, gentlemen. I hope
you’ll get some rest tonight. Please keep me informed of your decision,
and if you do get together with Charge Kel, I’d like to be a part of that
meeting. It can never be harmful to have my own knowledge grown, even if
I’m not a good choice to help with the surgery.” He stood as he
spoke. “I’ll take my leave. Contact me anytime if I’m needed.”
The two men nodded and Seren left with one
last wish for a good night’s sleep.
Oz and Cay leaned back into the small
couch, with Oz soon resting his head on Cay’s shoulder.
“You’re handling this much better than I
am,” Oz commented.
Cay tilted his head and rested his cheek
on Oz’s hair. “It helps me to focus on the medical aspect of it,” he
confessed. “Instead of worrying, I can be constructive in my thinking and
be better prepared overall.”
Oz’s voice dropped to a low whisper.
“I don’t have the extensive medical training you do, so that doesn’t work for
me. All I can think about is that we might lose her. My mind keeps
flashing back to that day she got hurt.”
Cay felt a pain in his chest at just the
mention of that day. The three of them, as was typical, had been playing
together after school. It had been the cold season and snow covered the
ground, but that hadn’t bothered them. Building snow forts and impromptu
snowball fights were an enjoyed part of their childhood.
On that day, the three of them had been
working on a fort and been building it against several trees that grew in Oz’s
yard. None of them had paid much attention to the icicles hanging from
the branches above them. It had been a shock to the two boys when one of
the icicles dropped and gouged Amrynn in the back of the head.
She hadn’t made a sound when it hit her;
just dropped to the ground in an unconscious heap at Cayson’s side. Blood
from the fresh wound had stained the snow around her and Cay remembered
screaming for Oz to go get his dads to help them. He’d fallen to his
knees next to her and ripped off his scarf to hold it against the wound and try
to stop the bleeding.
Later, he and Oz had watched as medics
worked over Amrynn’s unconscious form before hurrying her to the
hospital. She’d lain in a coma for three days while the doctors worked to
prevent bleeding into her brain. Eventually she’d turned a corner and
began responding well to treatment, but that image of Amrynn bleeding into the
snow and looking like she was already lost to them was a picture that the two
men would always have in their heads.
“We’re not going to lose her, Oz,” Cay
said definitively. “I won’t let it happen.”
You know I love this series, JL. I love how you tell a story! I hope that you do continue this and that Amm becomes well again. I'm also dying to know about Corbin and Kel!! Please let your muse talk to you!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dizzy :) I am determined to someday finish this...I hope! LOL. Thank you for your encouragement :)
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I second Dizzy's comments!I really want to know the rest of the Story!
ReplyDeleteIf you need a break from this story I would also be happy to see what your other characters are up too. I love all of them!
Thanks you so much for writing these stories. I'very reread all of them numerous times. You have a wonderful talent for storytelling.
I really want to finish this story too, KK! There are also plenty of other characters and stories I'd like to write as well. It's frustrating that they are all being so silent right now. I need some inspiration! I love and am so glad to know that you've reread my stories so frequently. That is very encouraging to know. I hope I can provide you with more before too long.
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I'm hooked and I would love more! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for letting me know, Stacey! I'm trying to get these characters to talk to me again!
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all of your stories are wonderful thank you for sharing. I am sure she will be fine but will be glad to see the wonderful details of how that make your stories special. Cory is neat and saren deserves a family. I to have reread and am ready to read war gift again. Thank you
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for commenting and letting me know :) The writing muse seems to have gotten a bit lost for me right now, although I'm not giving up. I really do want to continue this story to its end. I so much appreciate knowing you like my writing and that you've been rereading. Thank you!!!
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This has been a marathon session for me but I do so hope you continue... The characters are so well thought out and described, I'm on tender hook's for Day, Am and Oz, I solo want Cory and Kel to work out, and yes with Seen, but I think that's gonna take some persuasion... Then again I kinda like the idea that they get together, and of course the pilot and Kemble....so so many options... And yet I can appreciate if they are being stubborn and not 'talking "to you...hopefully they decide to do that soon...but regardless, I have loved loved loved what you've given so far, thank you
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for reaching out and giving me feedback on this story, Anonymous. It means a lot to me to hear from someone who enjoyed my story. I hope you get to read and like my other stories just as much.
DeleteI promise that I have not given up on The Travelers. Your words encourage me to go back and see if I can nudge them into talking to me again. Thank you!
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