Saturday, March 12, 2016

The Spank Dance

This is just a little side thing I did recently.  These two drabbles were written as companion pieces.
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The Spank Dance

It’s so humiliating.  I actually think it’s more embarrassing than getting the spanking itself.  Sure, while over the lap there is squirming and yelping, and sometimes tears, but the spank dance is worse.  That’s when the spanking is over and you’ve been allowed off the lap, but the punishment has been so thorough that the sting doesn’t fade, and instead feels like it goes on and on.  As a result, you’re grabbing your bottom cheeks and bouncing up and down on your toes, praying for the moment the burn becomes manageable.  I loathe doing the spank dance.


 Top's POV

I’m amused, relieved, guilty, and sorrowful right now, but the conflicting feelings aren’t unusual.  I’m used to them.  They’re to be expected as I observe the scene before me.  My man, my lover, has his hands clasped over his glowing bottom as he stomps and bounces around the room.  I’m amused because the dance is unlike him, yet relieved because he trusts his vulnerability to me; guilty because I’ve caused his physical pain, and sorrowful because performing this duty, even when necessary, is difficult.  I don’t loathe the spank dance as he does, but I dislike having to cause it.

4 comments:

  1. One of my favorite things is getting a tops prospective of spankings. Thanks!

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    1. Thanks, KK :) It does seem like most stories are written from the Brats/Sub's POV. I often like to know the Top's POV as well. I'm glad I was able to give that to you in this short piece :)
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  2. Omgg I thought I was going to die from your story withdrawal!! Both my phone and laptop died within DAYS of each other and I just got my phone replaced..no laptop yet tho :(

    This spank dance in brat's perspective makes me just want to wince in sympathy..but my favorite is the top's view. You can just tell he's sympathetic but at the same time think its utterly adorable. I thought you made the spank dance sound more adorable than it actually is..makes me want to cuddle the brat

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    1. I'm so sorry you're having technology issues, Yojin Chung. I know how frustrating that is.

      I'm so glad you appreciated both POVs in these drabbles, but that you liked hearing the Top's thoughts even more. The Top definitely finds his brat adorable, even while he sympathizes with the pain, and he'll absolutely be cuddling his brat once the "dance" is over.
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